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Ivy

February 24, 2010

Sometimes mind seems
A nest of twigs
Scattered all over due to strong gusts of wind

Sometimes it seems
A round mass of moss
Soggy with irksome thoughts

Sometimes like a wall
Overgrown with an ivy
Of your memories

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  1. pistaye permalink
    February 24, 2010 12:26 pm

    Ivy of your memories that you want to cherish at times and throw away at other times that try the soul!

    Nice poem 🙂

    • February 25, 2010 9:37 am

      The problem with ivy is that it couldn’t be thrown away that easily!

  2. February 24, 2010 12:48 pm

    Wow! This is intense, decorated with beautiful images and impressive similes! Its very cohesive and one of your very best! I envy your muse 😛

    • February 25, 2010 9:38 am

      Thanks for the kind words! 🙂

  3. Anonymous permalink
    February 24, 2010 3:45 pm

    ohho….
    so u r a poet too !! 🙂

  4. Adnan permalink
    February 24, 2010 4:23 pm

    Nice poem… Keep it up!

  5. zindagi-ki-diary permalink
    February 24, 2010 7:04 pm

    mass of moss!

    Interesting…

    • February 25, 2010 9:40 am

      Sort of grosses me out but yes, it seems sometimes 😛

  6. February 25, 2010 4:48 am

    Nice one :)…

    • February 25, 2010 9:41 am

      Thanks!

      Man, your DP is scary! 😛

  7. February 25, 2010 5:00 am

    Beautiful Poem

  8. February 25, 2010 6:56 am

    Nicely written… enclosing all colors of mind.. 🙂

    • February 25, 2010 9:41 am

      Yes, green and brown. It should have been gray and blue actually 🙂

  9. February 25, 2010 12:53 pm

    Phir Yaadaain?

    Nice poem…

    Allah aur acchi acchi yaadain de, ameen.

  10. February 26, 2010 5:20 pm

    Beautifully expressed in words…

  11. March 1, 2010 2:48 pm

    Parataxis, Ayesha, employ it more, even if deliberatley. It was a nice poem though. 🙂

    • March 2, 2010 6:06 pm

      Thanks for appreciating the poem! And thanks for teaching me a new term too! 😀

  12. March 5, 2010 3:08 pm

    very nice

    • March 6, 2010 2:27 pm

      Thank you. I liked your DP. It’s very artistic!

  13. March 23, 2010 4:10 pm

    BEAUTIFUL! =)

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