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Plain Love Story

October 5, 2009

plainlovestoryFor three years she told him every hour of every day that she loved him. Then the girl got fed up. She realized he was dominating her life and in order to bring peace she had to throw him out. She did. He yearned. She disliked him. He begged. She hated him.

He said he couldn’t live without her. She said she was unsure of their future. He started writing imaginary letters to her. He would talk for hours about their imaginary future. When imagination took control of his sense he lost touch with reality and ended in lunatic asylum.

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  1. October 5, 2009 1:37 pm

    Oh lala, what a love story, girls always want dominate boys but always like to be dominated by boys…

    • October 5, 2009 6:50 pm

      I’m trying to decipher your comment πŸ™„

  2. October 5, 2009 1:43 pm

    i would rather say another painful plan love story, but ended here quite in dramatic fashion, just like lollywood movie end. But well written and exaclty 100 words amazing…

    • October 5, 2009 6:51 pm

      Which Lollywood movie has the hero end up in lunatic asylum?! 😈

    • October 6, 2009 10:02 am

      None with exception of Star-cast Sultan Rahi;), By the way i meant, To complete the story in 100words you ended up the story in quite dramatic way just like how lollywood movie ends…:P

  3. October 5, 2009 1:43 pm

    err *plain*

    • October 6, 2009 5:41 pm

      I think 100-word fiction can’t be written without some dramatic ending πŸ˜›

  4. October 5, 2009 5:13 pm

    Assalamoalaikum,

    A well written story, but thanks God its a story!!:D
    I would say men are too ahem, beter not say, but yeah, sort of stubborn to lament for a woman!!

    I would say it only exists here, in the story..

    πŸ˜€
    I would like to think my husband would end up there in case ofmy death or… death:P

  5. October 5, 2009 5:14 pm

    `1ok, maybe not end up there, but mad in my grief

    • October 5, 2009 6:56 pm

      W’salam:

      Thanks!

      I know men and even women are too stubborn and tough to end up in lunatic asylum after being dumped by their beloveds. BUT there have been chances, though very rare, of someone going mad.

      That’s why I like fiction, one can experiment a lot. And write down those things which may or may not happen πŸ™‚

      Why would you die (young)?! πŸ˜› And kids are the reason to keep the grieving spouse alive anyway.

  6. October 5, 2009 11:17 pm

    I’m not sure who’s side I’m on, the girl’s or the guy’s..hmm

    • October 6, 2009 5:43 pm

      Even I’m not sure. But the guy’s character is rather poignant.

  7. October 6, 2009 5:58 am

    I doubt her love for him if she got over him that easily and threw him out of her life at will; but yes, writing fiction gives one the liberty to create situations as per one’s liking πŸ™‚

    • October 6, 2009 5:44 pm

      It happens! Believe me it happens. Where either of the dumping person gets over it so easily and quickly πŸ˜›

  8. October 6, 2009 8:05 am

    Oh my god…. how painful story you brought up…
    She never LOVED him…..
    Little but breath held…. πŸ™‚

    • October 6, 2009 5:46 pm

      Fiction writing is so diverse. May be she loved him but she too was suffering from some sort of (mental) malady and dumped him πŸ™‚

  9. October 7, 2009 6:36 am

    3 yrs. is quite some time. He could have kaanvinced 11 instead of 1, had he moved on. kaisa?!?

    • October 8, 2009 11:07 am

      Unfortunately he wasn’t a Casanova πŸ˜›

  10. October 11, 2009 3:54 pm

    during the loving dys of her she had not wprried abt the future… when she had thrown him away and wen boy comprimised she doubted abt the future…! it is wat the gals mentality here…. its al abt the thing is attractin not love.!

    I thnk she got another boy frd who being accepted her love… just crazy yaar.. these gals πŸ™‚

  11. October 18, 2009 1:39 pm

    nothin changed actually …

    before he was mad to find her …

    later mad about her

    after mad that he lost her ..

    we’ve alway bee lunatic … only that she showed the path to the asylums …

    • October 22, 2009 2:38 pm

      That’s the best ever response to this story πŸ˜€

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