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Duped

September 19, 2009

clouds1095 days, 10 hours, 20 minutes and 30 seconds later his world came to a halt. His eyes that used to defy the twinkling stars turned into stones. She was his everything, a lover, a friend and a confidant. Life without you would be like wandering in the barren deserts, he had told her once.

Now that she was gone, he had already turned into lunatic with no sense of time and place. He could feel just one thing and that was pain. The piercing pain of that frozen moment when she eloped with someone else on their wedding day.

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13 Comments leave one →
  1. September 19, 2009 1:28 pm

    یاد ماضی عذاب ہے یارب
    چھین لے مجھ سے حافظہ میرا

  2. September 19, 2009 3:45 pm

    It’s painful Ayesha….piercing pain which has no cure….. 😦

  3. September 20, 2009 12:36 pm

    i am thinking about the guy with whom this thing can happen, now a days teenage guys are so immature and weak, also they are not able to tolerate his gf talking to someone else……

    Anyways i like this post, especially it’s creativity.
    WELL DONE ayesha. for me you are a novelist and poet.

    • September 21, 2009 8:56 pm

      Well the person truly in love with a girl in such situation be devastated!

      Thanks for appreciation. I wish I could write a novel 🙂

  4. September 20, 2009 3:41 pm

    beautiful …

    with so few words you said so much …

    just … great 🙂

    • September 21, 2009 8:57 pm

      Thanks!

      100-word fiction is my new romance these days. But it is tough to explain in limited words 🙂

  5. September 21, 2009 3:01 pm

    Pain in Love

    Wooooow great blessing….. !!!!!!!!!!

    • September 21, 2009 8:58 pm

      There is no love without pain. 😐

      (CORRECTED) 🙂

    • September 22, 2009 5:23 pm

      There is no love without pain…. CORRECTION 🙂

  6. zarak permalink
    September 21, 2009 6:35 pm

    nice but heartbreaking story…

    • September 21, 2009 8:59 pm

      Not all stories have good ending. At least not the one that I write 😀

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