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Pining

July 14, 2009

Like held up
In a small
Dingy room
Losing the remnants of life
Bit by bit

3 Comments leave one →
  1. July 15, 2009 6:30 am

    Thats beautiful!

    I wish I too could convey my feelings with such economy of language!

    • Ayesha permalink
      July 15, 2009 2:10 pm

      Thank you!

  2. July 19, 2009 9:13 am

    I shouldn’t add anything after Aadil’s comment but still, I also wish I could employ ‘economy of language’ in my poetic endeavours.
    This is very beautiful🙂

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