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Enigma

February 23, 2009

She descends

From the fairyland

On to my mind

Takes hold of my thoughts

Then she moves towards my heart

Grasps it fully

From there she dissolves

Into every inch of mine

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15 Comments leave one →
  1. Cavaliere permalink
    February 23, 2009 8:37 pm

    Simple and yet so ‘enigmatic’ 🙂

  2. Asma Ahsan permalink
    February 26, 2009 6:47 am

    how come the angels are always women and the devils are always men??? 😛

    Interesting poem. 😛

  3. Cavaliere permalink
    February 26, 2009 2:23 pm

    @ Asma Ahsan
    Bilkul sahi kaha jee ap nay. Mard hotay he “devils” hein — saaray k saaray , always as you said. Ab bholiye ga nahi ! 😀

  4. Asma Ahsan permalink
    March 1, 2009 5:08 am

    LOL – CAV – hai kitna dukh lag gaya bhai ko – jaisay sab khawaateen aik see nahin hoti, sab mard bhi aik jasay nahin hotay na – kuchh farishta-sift bhi hotay hi hon ge – kaheen to 😛

  5. March 2, 2009 1:20 pm

    @ Asma Ahsan
    LOL !

  6. March 5, 2009 10:26 am

    Yeh kya baat huwi Devils , devila hotey hain aur Mard , Mard yeh donon aik nahin ho saktey 😉

  7. kashkin permalink
    March 6, 2009 2:48 am

    Beautiful poem…the emotion and its consumption through its effect….

  8. bmk permalink
    March 6, 2009 7:56 am

    mei keya, kithay? something to share with you…

  9. March 6, 2009 12:33 pm

    long time no post … !!

  10. March 8, 2009 8:11 am

    Asma, Cavaliere:
    ایک مردانہ لطیفہ
    تمام مرد مر کر بھوت بن جاتے ہیں مگر عورتیں مر کر بھی چڑیل کی چڑیل ہی رہتی ہیں۔

  11. д§mд permalink
    March 8, 2009 10:41 am

    attraction =)

  12. Ayesha permalink
    March 12, 2009 9:12 pm

    Very, very interesting comments 😀

    The poem was basically about mother’s thoughts 😕

    G: The joke is funny 😛

  13. Asma Ahsan permalink
    March 13, 2009 11:27 am

    LOL! Good joke. 😛

  14. March 13, 2009 12:56 pm

    Now when I understood the context, I cannot hide my admiration for the poem. Loved the way the poem descends 🙂

  15. Ayesha permalink
    March 15, 2009 10:46 am

    Thank You! 🙂

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