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July 4, 2008

Your voice is like a symphony

Like a cool whiff of air in the desert

It sounds as sweet as

The pattering of raindrops

On the tin roof at night

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  1. Kashkin permalink
    July 5, 2008 2:15 am

    The pattering of raindrops

    On the tin roof at night

    Beautiful these two verses are; creates an imaginary bindings to the concept of nature and human existence..I liked a lot.

  2. July 5, 2008 6:14 am

    lovely! reminds me a phrase from a rain poem in our ninth or tenth class enlgish where the poet where the rain drops ‘clattered like a horse hoofs on the tin roof’ ….

  3. July 5, 2008 6:19 am

    *where the poet DESCRIBES rain drops*

  4. Ayesha permalink
    July 5, 2008 8:39 am

    I think I read that too, though don’t remember it at all.

    Thank you, btw I like the pattering of rain drops on the tin roof.

  5. nayni permalink
    July 5, 2008 9:14 am

    And I like cool whiff of air in the desert 🙂

  6. Ayesha permalink
    July 5, 2008 10:22 am

    Yeah one is romantic the other one is life saving 😛

  7. July 5, 2008 9:24 pm

    raat youn dil mein teri
    khoi huee yaad aayee
    jaisay veeraanay mein chupke se bahar aa jaaey
    jaisay sehraon mein holay se chala baad-e-naseem
    jaisay beemaar ko bewajaa karaar aa jaaey!

  8. Ayesha permalink
    July 5, 2008 9:39 pm

    Now dear Nadeen you are the second person to have quoted Faiz after reading my poem 😛

    Why is that?

  9. Kashkin permalink
    July 6, 2008 12:53 am

    Klassic…Faiz making an appearance from the tin roofs to cool whiff of the deserts….

  10. July 6, 2008 11:30 am

    Achha? Who is going around copying MY STYLE!

    huh 😛

  11. Ayesha permalink
    July 6, 2008 12:16 pm

    Nah, Shobig first commented on Stranger that way 😛

  12. July 6, 2008 7:29 pm

    Pardesi Baabu? He was shifting back to UK I think – Well, Kand Shobig can finally have a cosy chat over a real cup of coffee 🙂

  13. July 6, 2008 7:29 pm

    K and SHOBIG – spellings 😛

  14. Ayesha permalink
    July 6, 2008 8:44 pm

    Hahaha yeah the same babu 😛

    Well need to know from K how was Wimbledon. Nadal won the match 😀

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