Posted by: Ayesha | September 8, 2009

A Question

michael naplesSince you’ve parted
I do nothing but wonder
Was I naïve to think:
That you were
The key
To that big,
Rusted lock
Hanging on my
Enchained fate?

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  1. Thinking and coming up with such poetic words for something you want to express is difficult isn’t it? I so want to do poetry and be able to say compactly, the things that never get explained in even a thousand words :-( … Did you write this yourself?

    By: Haris Gulzar on September 8, 2009
    at 6:58 pm

    Reply

    • Yep! I wrote it…

      By: Ayesha on September 8, 2009
      at 7:21 pm

  2. Welcome back ayesha….finally you are successful to login… :)

    By: captureuniverse on September 9, 2009
    at 4:37 am

    Reply

    • I am back… thanks to proxy server :P

      By: Ayesha on September 9, 2009
      at 2:24 pm

  3. good to see kicking again … necessity is the mother of invention … let us know if you ever to plan to kick the certain ISP’s ***. mangal B is friend of a friend’s friend. :P

    wonder kiss ko mukhatib kiya jaa raha hay @ above.

    By: BMK on September 9, 2009
    at 5:10 am

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    • LOL at Mangal B!

      Well, he is so high tech I didn’t know… :P

      By: Ayesha on September 9, 2009
      at 2:25 pm

  4. Was I naïve to think:
    That you were
    The key
    To that big,
    Rusted lock
    Hanging on my
    Enchained fate

    TYPICAL female reasoning! :P

    Poor thing may have gone off to find work so he can earn more to support wife and kids – the minute they part, the women always start thinking it was a flop relationship. :P

    By: Asma Ahsan on September 9, 2009
    at 5:41 am

    Reply

    • That imaginary ‘he’ didn’t go off to work. He LEFT ;)

      By: Ayesha on September 9, 2009
      at 2:26 pm

  5. Glad at least you’ve unlocked your blog with the key of some wonderful poetry :)

    My type of poetry, full of emotions, melancholic!

    Write more!

    By: Aadil on September 9, 2009
    at 6:13 am

    Reply

    • You’ve put it so nicely. Thank you :)

      Don’t worry I removed the extra comments.

      By: Ayesha on September 9, 2009
      at 2:36 pm

  6. @ Aadil

    you seem more glad then much more…….
    Your IT Problem…now you need to resolve IT issue… :)

    By: captureuniverse on September 9, 2009
    at 7:37 am

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    • Yep the IT issue :(

      I hope my friends understand it by now. Will request the kind blogger to delete excessive comments. I’ve got this unreliable browser at office and I can’t help it.

      By: Aadil on September 9, 2009
      at 8:03 am

  7. Beautiful poem and just as succinct – and this I ve noticed is a characteristic of your poems. :)
    Very well done, again.

    By: Cavaliere on September 10, 2009
    at 4:58 pm

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    • Thanks Cav for the encouraging words. I can’t compose long poetic lines… so that has naturally become my style :)

      By: Ayesha on September 11, 2009
      at 11:03 am

  8. its called being back with a bang!!

    well written… I feel kind of sad myself today.. hence fits my mood…

    By: Alhamdolillah on September 11, 2009
    at 1:50 pm

    Reply

    • Khair shaa!

      By: Ayesha on September 11, 2009
      at 2:38 pm

  9. Beautifully written!

    By: Raheel on September 16, 2009
    at 6:35 am

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