Posted by: Ayesha | July 10, 2009

Illusion

Love is an illusion
A mirage
It vanishes
The moment eyes wake up

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  1. A dominant perspective this is about love! Love as a phenomena is the most defined yet intriguing one; it has a thousand perspectives yet one can’t be precise what its all about.
    You have beautifully put what you had to say about it :)

    By: Aadil on July 11, 2009
    at 6:38 am

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    • Thanks Aadil! And I agree is only one of the many aspects of love :)

      By: Ayesha on July 14, 2009
      at 6:40 pm

  2. ouch!

    By: azure on July 11, 2009
    at 7:33 am

    Reply

    • *SIGH* :/

      By: Ayesha on July 14, 2009
      at 6:40 pm

  3. when one is in love
    eyes never wake up :)

    By: DuFFeR - ڈفر on July 11, 2009
    at 9:03 am

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    • One day they do… they sure do! :)

      By: Ayesha on July 14, 2009
      at 6:41 pm

  4. I would rather say,

    InComplete Love is an Illusion
    ………
    ………
    ………

    Coz True Love never vanishes even eyes are close or open…….

    By: ykhan on July 11, 2009
    at 4:13 pm

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    • So how many have experienced the complete love?! :evil:

      By: Ayesha on July 14, 2009
      at 6:42 pm

  5. but i will still traverse
    the sands
    from one such illusion
    to the next
    until i discover
    the oasis
    where there’s plenty
    for a life-time
    of happiness.
    _____________

    oo la laa ! that’s a poem ! :P
    wow !
    i am good ! Lol :D

    By: Cavaliere on July 12, 2009
    at 12:08 pm

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    • You are damn good! These are wonderful lines full of hope :D

      By: Ayesha on July 14, 2009
      at 6:42 pm


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