Posted by: Ayesha | July 8, 2009

Between You and Me

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We are the inhabitants
Of a different world
Where things that interest us are told and retold
The art and literature
The characters of epic proportions
The sublime tales of antiquity
Diverse discussion on everything imaginable
The electronic laughter ‘LOL’
Harmless gossips
Form part of our conversation
Each day of a month
And every month of a year
Year after year
Our words echo
Between you and me


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  1. Hmm MashaAllaha good one Ayesha. Although reading first time I barely understood it..

  2. Thank you! :) My poems are always like that, a little difficult to understand… as if I write them for myself only.

  3. i think it was the same for me, but I stopped writing and even reading poems for about hmm 8, 9 years. so its kinda hard for me to re awaken it, its better asleep:D

    • Why not? Poetry is a nice way of expression :)

  4. A relevant theme expressed very beautifully!
    I quite liked it. It is lovely! :)

    Write more poetry!

    • Thank you Aadil! :) Will try for sure.

  5. I think poetry cannopt be forced, it comes as an inspiration, form within and one must know their words. Because of not reading, I have alos lost the words. i mainly even when writing use the plainest words and format to get the message acros.. it wont work with poetry and I dont get inspired, but I WILL read yours in future, hehe. I already read ll the previous ones that you wrote, mashaAllah very good..

    • I totally agree with that poetry or even creative writing can’t be forced. Thanks for reading and appreciating :)

  6. nice post…a picture is worth thousand words…..to be honest ,while reading i was expecting a phrase on silence…. but still ending lines were too good….For me you are poet…

    • I have written a couple of poems on silence too. This one had to be like that. Thanks for the encouraging compliments! :)

  7. Wonderfuil poem Ayehsa ! :)

    • Thanks for reading and appreciating it :)


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