Posted by: Ayesha | October 8, 2008

My Star

You are a star

That roams in the

Infiniteness of the universe

When I see you

Sprinkling light at night

I wish to cover

The distance of a light year

In the blink of an eye

To be with you


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  1. Very nice!

    I’m a star gazer,
    feeding on the
    sprinkles of light,
    almost every dark night,
    except when the evil haze,
    blindfold my bliss;
    I suffer a death of hunger
    every now and then.

  2. Nice – er – should I imagine what the star itself wants to answer to that – probably said “Thankyou for your comments :)

  3. very touching and passionate!

    and that too written in terms of universe, this has to be my favorite… :D

    do u mind if i can use it for my own playful deeds :P

  4. hmmm mathematical poem

  5. Thank you all! :)

    I just try!

  6. Exquisite: I won’t mind :P


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