Comments on: Poems of sorrow

By: Ayesha

Ayesha — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 13:13:16 +0000

Thank you all,
Nadeen, Aadil, MZ, Nayni and G…

I agree there is no escape from memories.

By: Goonga

Goonga — Thu, 31 Jul 2008 06:29:26 +0000

Very nice…
I liked the Memories. Its bit interesting conflict.
Its been for me forever.

Memories are never constituted with gifts/cards/letters/sms/pics/emails/places etc
I can destroy every tangible thing and leave behind the places and times but still I cant escape memory!
I cant escape my experience because that is what I am. I cant stop myself being me.
I cant lie to myself that her pleasant body odor was sweeter than this fragrance.
Memories… Khudaya chheen ley mujh sey haafiza mera…

By: nayni

nayni — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 21:25:58 +0000

hehehehe You know Ayesha I mostly post the verses that do not reflect me … and when my friends read them , they ask ” o jee sabb khairrrr hae naa ”

Your all poems are lovely ,however I liked ” I’m & Pain ” the most .

Keep Writing

By: MZ

MZ — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 06:35:48 +0000

beautiful poems, nice. keep posting

By: Aadil

Aadil — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 03:47:14 +0000

They are beautiful short poems! What I liked was the economy of words that you used to describe intense emotions.

Keep them coming!

By: Nadeen

Nadeen — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 02:41:27 +0000

“SOMETHING” – Maam, please fix my spellings

By: Nadeen

Nadeen — Wed, 30 Jul 2008 02:40:45 +0000

Hmm…why the explanation – explanation means being guilty of comething

They are good – keep writing!

By: Ayesha

Ayesha — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 23:03:27 +0000

Thanks K for your encouragment!

By: Kashkin

Kashkin — Tue, 29 Jul 2008 18:35:59 +0000

Beautiful haiku like poems, dispersed in their own existence…Poetry or another form of art does not have to reflect the way an artist feels, but how others feel.

I think you have written them very well in its universal sense.

Keep up the good work.