Your voice is like a symphony
Like a cool whiff of air in the desert
It sounds as sweet as
The pattering of raindrops
On the tin roof at night
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Ayesha
The pattering of raindrops
On the tin roof at night
Beautiful these two verses are; creates an imaginary bindings to the concept of nature and human existence..I liked a lot.
By: Kashkin on July 5, 2008
at 2:15 am
lovely! reminds me a phrase from a rain poem in our ninth or tenth class enlgish where the poet where the rain drops ‘clattered like a horse hoofs on the tin roof’ ….
By: Aadil on July 5, 2008
at 6:14 am
*where the poet DESCRIBES rain drops*
By: Aadil on July 5, 2008
at 6:19 am
I think I read that too, though don’t remember it at all.
Thank you, btw I like the pattering of rain drops on the tin roof.
By: Ayesha on July 5, 2008
at 8:39 am
And I like cool whiff of air in the desert
By: nayni on July 5, 2008
at 9:14 am
Yeah one is romantic the other one is life saving
By: Ayesha on July 5, 2008
at 10:22 am
raat youn dil mein teri
khoi huee yaad aayee
jaisay veeraanay mein chupke se bahar aa jaaey
jaisay sehraon mein holay se chala baad-e-naseem
jaisay beemaar ko bewajaa karaar aa jaaey!
By: Nadeen on July 5, 2008
at 9:24 pm
Now dear Nadeen you are the second person to have quoted Faiz after reading my poem
Why is that?
By: Ayesha on July 5, 2008
at 9:39 pm
Klassic…Faiz making an appearance from the tin roofs to cool whiff of the deserts….
By: Kashkin on July 6, 2008
at 12:53 am
Achha? Who is going around copying MY STYLE!
huh
By: Nadeen on July 6, 2008
at 11:30 am
Nah, Shobig first commented on Stranger that way
By: Ayesha on July 6, 2008
at 12:16 pm
Pardesi Baabu? He was shifting back to UK I think – Well, Kand Shobig can finally have a cosy chat over a real cup of coffee
By: Nadeen on July 6, 2008
at 7:29 pm
K and SHOBIG – spellings
By: Nadeen on July 6, 2008
at 7:29 pm
Hahaha yeah the same babu
Well need to know from K how was Wimbledon. Nadal won the match
By: Ayesha on July 6, 2008
at 8:44 pm